Inquiry Proect Beta

The draft of my final paper can be found here.

 

Right now I am pretty proud of myself for banging this out during a sick day (yes, more headaches).  However I feel like I lost a lot of my direction towards the end and I think I am too close to the writing right now to see exactly where it stops making sense/being cohesive.  I also have some work to do to meet the 3500 word requirement, I think I’m at just about 2900 now. So I’m not sure where I should beef up the writing, or if I should include a whole new concept somewhere? Or is the content more important than the word count and I should leave it be? I don’t know, I need direction! Eek!

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